Master prompt
EntrePass rejection — business plan + funding evidence rebuttal
EntrePass for foreign entrepreneurs: refused when business plan lacks innovation, funding, or IP. Appeal with strengthened business plan + funding evidence.
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EntrePass is administered by MOM in partnership with Enterprise Singapore (formerly Standards, Productivity and Innovation Board) for foreign entrepreneurs setting up innovative Singapore-registered companies. The framework requires the applicant to satisfy at least ONE of three innovator-class criteria: ENTREPRENEUR (raised funding from accredited investors), INNOVATOR (IP / R&D / partnerships with research institutes), or INVESTOR (investment + senior executive role).
EntrePass refusals are appealable to MOM within 3 months of [REFUSAL_DATE].
Draft an EntrePass appeal strategy for [FOUNDER_NAME] of [COMPANY_NAME] (sector: [BUSINESS_SECTOR]). Funding: [FUNDING_TO_DATE_SGD]. IP / innovation: [IP_OR_INNOVATION]. Refusal cited: [REFUSAL_REASON].
§1 — ENTREPASS ELIGIBILITY CRITERIA — DIAGNOSE GAP (150-180 words)
Three innovator-class routes:
A. ENTREPRENEUR
• S$100,000 funding raised from accredited investors (VCs, angel networks recognised by EnterpriseSG)
• OR: incubation at a recognised SG accelerator / incubator (SGInnovate, Startupbootcamp, BLOCK71, etc.)
• OR: business in EnterpriseSG-recognised sector with funding trajectory
B. INNOVATOR
• IP rights held by founder (patents, trademarks)
• OR: ongoing R&D collaboration with SG university / research institute (NUS, NTU, A*STAR)
• OR: founder has won industry-recognised innovation awards
• OR: domain expertise demonstrated by prior leadership role / academic credentials
C. INVESTOR
• Founder has personally invested + serves as senior executive
• Track record of building / scaling businesses
• Skin in the game in current venture
For [FOUNDER_NAME]:
• Match [FUNDING_TO_DATE_SGD] against ENTREPRENEUR criteria (S$100K from accredited investors)
• Match [IP_OR_INNOVATION] against INNOVATOR criteria
• Identify which criterion the application should have satisfied — and likely why it fell short
§2 — REFUSAL DIAGNOSTIC (110-140 words)
Common refusal grounds:
A. "Business does not meet innovation criteria"
• Generic / lifestyle business (consultancy, retail, food without innovation angle)
• No IP, no R&D, no recognised accelerator backing
• Plan reads as employment substitute, not entrepreneurial venture
B. "Insufficient funding evidence"
• Personal savings only; no third-party investor commitment
• Funding from non-accredited investors (family loans, undocumented sources)
• Funding committed but not deployed / banked in [COMPANY_NAME]
C. "Founder's role not commensurate with executive position"
• Founder is silent partner / passive investor
• Operations led by others; founder's presence in SG unclear
D. "Company too early-stage / dormant"
• [COMPANY_NAME] recently incorporated, no traction
• No employees, no contracts, no revenue / pipeline
E. "Sector concerns"
• Saturated sector (generic consulting, basic e-commerce)
• [BUSINESS_SECTOR] not in EnterpriseSG focus areas
§3 — APPEAL — STRENGTHENING EVIDENCE (160-200 words)
A. FUNDING REINFORCEMENT
• Secure additional commitments from EnterpriseSG-recognised accredited investors
• Bank statement showing [FUNDING_TO_DATE_SGD] deposited in [COMPANY_NAME]'s ACRA-registered bank account
• Convertible notes / SAFE agreements signed
• If raising in progress: Term Sheets from named investors
B. INNOVATION DOCUMENTATION
• Patent filing receipts (PCT / IPOS) — even pending applications count
• R&D collaboration agreements with NUS / NTU / A*STAR — signed MoU
• Recognition: industry awards, accelerator acceptance (SGInnovate, Antler, Entrepreneur First)
• Customer letters of intent / pilot project agreements
• Technical documentation of proprietary technology
C. FOUNDER PROFILE
• Update CV highlighting:
- Prior entrepreneurial / executive roles
- Domain expertise via academic credentials, professional certifications
- Speaking engagements, publications, patents
• LinkedIn updated
• Industry recognition (Forbes 30 Under 30, sector awards)
D. BUSINESS-PLAN UPGRADE
• Revised business plan with:
- Clear value proposition vs competitors
- Total addressable market quantified
- Go-to-market strategy specific to SG / SEA
- Local hiring plan (Singapore-based PMET hires in next 12 months)
- Path to revenue + breakeven
- Risk / mitigation section
E. SECTORAL ALIGNMENT
• Frame [BUSINESS_SECTOR] against EnterpriseSG focus sectors (digital, biomed, agrifood, urban solutions, advanced manufacturing)
• If genuinely outside focus areas: argue uniqueness
§4 — APPEAL LETTER STRUCTURE (110-140 words)
[FOUNDER_NAME] / [COMPANY_NAME]'s authorised representative submits:
"To: MOM Work Pass Division (EntrePass Section)
cc: Enterprise Singapore
Re: Appeal against EntrePass refusal — [FOUNDER_NAME], [COMPANY_NAME]
Refusal letter dated: [REFUSAL_DATE]
§1 — INTRODUCTION
[FOUNDER_NAME], founder and CEO of [COMPANY_NAME] (UEN: [UEN]), respectfully appeals the refusal of the EntrePass application.
§2 — RESPONSE TO REFUSAL GROUNDS
[Specific point-by-point]
§3 — ADDITIONAL FUNDING EVIDENCE
• S$[X] deposited in [Bank Name] account [last 4 digits] dated [date]
• Term sheets from [accredited investor names]
• Convertible note agreements (executed)
§4 — INNOVATION + IP
• Patent application [number] filed with [IPOS / PCT] dated [date]
• R&D MoU with [research institute] signed [date]
• Industry recognition: [list]
§5 — LOCAL EMPLOYMENT COMMITMENT
[COMPANY_NAME] commits to hiring [N] Singapore-based PMETs in next 12 months.
§6 — REVISED BUSINESS PLAN
Attached.
§7 — CONCLUSION
Reconsideration requested.
[Signatory]"
§5 — PARALLEL TRACKS (60-90 words)
• Apply for incubator / accelerator placement (SGInnovate, Antler) — instant signal of innovation credibility
• EDB pre-engagement: for serious deep-tech ventures, EDB International Business Office can endorse the application
• Alternative pass routes:
- ONE Pass / Personalised EP (if founder qualifies on track record)
- Tech.Pass — closed to new applicants since Sep 2023
- EP via the company sponsoring the founder (requires majority external shareholders)
§6 — TIMELINE (40-60 words)
• Appeal within 3 months of [REFUSAL_DATE]
• Processing: 4-8 weeks
• If refused again: fresh application after material change (new funding round / new IP grant / accelerator placement); typically 6+ months
• Track sector trend — EnterpriseSG focus areas update annually
End with: "DRAFT EntrePass appeal — MOM-licensed Employment Agency or Singapore-qualified lawyer review recommended. Verify current EntrePass criteria + EnterpriseSG focus sectors at mom.gov.sg/passes-and-permits/entrepass/eligibility. For most refusals, the highest-leverage fixes are accelerator placement + accredited-investor funding rounds. Tech.Pass is closed to new applicants since 2023 — do not advise as alternative."Unlock the vault to see the full prompt
